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Heya my name is Josh. Er.. I absolutely love techno/trance songs and bla bla bla... Bye!
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Ok SP1R1T been wiv u 4 a wile and its obvious your improving since your very first song now lets take a look at this one. Like the start an easy build-up but not a boring build-up and the simulated crowd is wicked I luv those things cuz they make u feel like ur really there! The tune is really cool but it doesn't have enough power behind it, add some synths or an extra behind beat that really brings it out and gets people goin nuts! (Sorry I can't be more specific I dont know how these programs work) Keep workin on it (I no its annoyin) but I this song has ULTRA potential to becoming a good beach holiday club song like my personal faves Cafe Del Mar or Played-A-Live. Well gd luck 2 u sir and let me no if u bring anything else out!
Chandler-J out.
Author's Response:
Thanks alot man, Im really gonna try my best to do some stuff like Verachoca - Carte Blanche :P
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Well Sp1r1t recommended I listen to this song and offer my advice so here I am. Starts out nicely although there isn't really enough of a kick that gets my 'heart-thumping'. The song stays similar and I like that, I don't like songs that diverse all the time to different styles but I feel you could have made more of the tune after the build-up, really make it come at you if you know what I mean. Perhaps it was a difficult tune to do this with but anyways if you eva want me to chek out some of your other work just message me.
Chandler-J out.
Author's Response:
Hmm, good review. Thanks for the info! =)
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Right there! That is an awesome song!
Chandler-J out!
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Intresting choice of instrument here, not as good as most of ur recent work but its still pretty strong, it doesn't have the power of ur normal songs that even tho its a gd tune, it doesn't leap out at you but ye that can b edited. So ye again nice 2 hear from u look foward 2 more of ur work.
Chandler-J out.
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thanks
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"Heya sry I aint been on in a wile!"
Well ye as i said aint ben here 4 some time but i is bak and i got a few messages from ya 2 answer :P. Awesome song here! Told u ud get better with time and I can see the introduction of choruses comin into ur work wich iz vry nice :D. Adore the bassline it kiks ass this is so far ur best piece of work but i hav 2 hear the other 1s u messaged me so ill c those now ;P.
Chandler-J out.
Author's Response:
:P ha
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Ok this is very very good. You have to finish this now!!!!
And if possible try and worm in some lyrics (not necessarily the actual ones, u could and then just mechanise the voice or something i dunno) but yea this sounds cool!
Chandler-J out.
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Well its unique but its not birlliant...yet. A few improvements and this could easily become a superb dance song. You definitely need to make the chorus stand out from everything, give people a reason to get up and dance. I do like the bassline in this piece although I don't like any of the tune that much. The synths are good but if I were you relook at some other possibilities for this tune, make it more jumpy and louder. Sorry if this is a lot to take in at once.
Ever bring anything out giv me a buzz.
Chandler-J out.
Author's Response:
Great review, man!
Well, this wasn't supposed to be brilliant, but I'll see what I can do to improve. Maybe I'll make a version 2.0...
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Now personally Im not into this type of music but I can say that for a techno song this is done pretty well. Nice job here, considering how I don't know much about techno songs Im afraid that I can't offer much in the way of advice so sorry about that. The crowd thing I kinda like tho its cool.
Well glad 2 see ur back man. Look foward 2 hearing from u again soon.
Chandler-J out.
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I really like the style, it has a different edge to it but you do need to work on timing for one - this song has the possibility of about 3 minutes. The other thing to do would be establish a chorus, you already appear to have one between 00:15 and 00:41 from ther you could go on with a verse and then come back to that original tune. Another thing to consider is add a few more synths, the one you have chosen is good but it could use some more in the background. Let me know if you bring anything out soon.
Chandler-J out.
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Ok as a dance song its a bit slow, a faster tempo would helped a lot here and the moments of stilness are slightly too long for a dance song people wanna be up moving most of the song. As an ambient song this would fit really well, just make it have less of a 'thump' but personally I like the effort for trying a hard song and Id luv 2 hear it with an increased tempo on it and maybe even some lyrics of some sorta rapper could work - but now I'm just chuking suggestions out.
Let me know if you make any changes.
Chandler-J out.
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